Finally, the first draft. 92 words too long!

I finally came up with a story. Somewhere I have to pull out 92 words, but here it is in its roughest glory. Cutting and editing will come later. I came up with this one because I always used to break my brothers model ships and try to hide it from him. The feelings are very familiar to me! I wish I had learned this lesson and saved myself a lot of sleepless nights!

Little Bear just had an accident. He broke his sister’s teacups for her china tea set that her auntie gave her. Little Bear felt awful because his sister was planning to use them the next day to have a tea party for her auntie. So Little Bear was thinking. He was trying to come up with a plan to keep his sister from finding out that he broke her tea cups; he was thinking of a lie.

Little Bear had been sitting and feeling bad for a very long time when his best friend Skeeter the Badger came by and asked him to play ball.

“Little Bear! Come play with me” Skeeter called out. “I just got a brand new red rubber ball. Let’s bounce it high in the sky and kick it as far as it will go! Come on Little Bear, I need a friend to play with!”

Little Bear jumped up and was going to play with his friend, but then he remembered his problem and sat back down. “I can’t” he said. “I have a big problem and I’m thinking of what to do.”

“What is the problem?” Skeeter asked.

And Little Bear told him, “I broke my sister’s tea set and I am thinking of a story to tell so that she won’t know that I did it.”

Skeeter looked at his friend and asked, “Why don’t you just tell the truth? I think she will be mad, but she will eventually forgive you”.

But Little bear said he would not and had to think of a story, so Skeeter went to play without him. Little Bear sat down to think and he felt even worse. Not only did he break his sister’s special tea set, but now Skeeter was playing ball and having fun without him.

So Little Bear sat on his log and thought, feeling very bad.

Some time later Little Bear’s best friend Petie the Bunny came by and asked Little Bear if he wanted to play follow the leader.

Again Little Bear jumped up because follow the leader was his favorite game, but then he remembered the tea set and he sat back down on his log with a hard thump and hung his head.

“I can’t,” he said sadly. “I broke my sister’s tea set and I am thinking of a story to tell so that she won’t know that I did it.”

Petie asked, “Why don’t you just tell the truth. I’m sure your sister will forgive you—even if she does get mad at first”.

But Little Bear said that he would not and he had to think of a story, so Petie went off to find someone else to play follow the leader with. Little Bear sadly watched him go. Not only did he break his sister’s special tea set, but now Skeeter was playing ball and having fun without him and Petie was playing follow the leader with someone else.

So Little Bear sat on his log and thought, feeling very, very bad.

Some time later his friend Ollie the Otter came by and asked Little Bear if he wanted to go swimming.

Again, Little Bear jumped up because it was a very hot day and he loved to swim more than anything, but then he remembered the tea set and he sat back down on his log with a hard thump and hung his head.

“I can’t,” he said sadly. “I broke my sister’s tea set and I am thinking of a story to tell so that she won’t know that I did it.”

“I think you should just tell her,” said Ollie. “She may be very mad, but eventually she will forgive you, and we can go swimming!”

But Little Bear said that he would not and he had to think of a story, so Ollie went off to swim in the cool river and left Little Bear. Little Bear sadly watched him go. Not only did he break his sister’s special tea set, but now Skeeter was playing ball and having fun without him and Petie was playing follow the leader with someone else and Ollie was swimming in the cool river.

So Little Bear sat on his log and thought, feeling very, very, very bad.

Finally, Lily, Little Bear’s sister came skipping by. She stopped in front of Little Bear and said “Little Bear, you are my favorite brother. Will you come to my very special tea party tomorrow?”

Now Little Bear felt very, very, very, very bad but he decided to follow his friends’ advice. “I’m not a good brother at all! I broke your teacups and now you can’t drink tea at all,” he wailed.

At first Lily looked very sad and Little Bear thought she would cry, but then she said, “I know it was hard for you to tell me, and I forgive you because you did the right thing after all.”

Now Little Bear felt very good and he and his sister went off to find their friends together.